These are so beautifully written. Besides the expression of the feelings behind them, i really liked how you picked just the right words, they really touched my heart. I also really like AABBCC rhymes so that was cherry on top!
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These are all so powerful. They speak to the invisible toll it takes ,daily ,to actually just survive in the world on depleted energy due to life’s stress and strain. The need to mentally dress yourself before you get out of the bed JUST to have enough to face today’s onslaught in silence. I hope that you are in a better place now and learned what you needed to learn. Also, I hope that you were as kind to yourself as you could have been during that period. ❤️
Wow! What a strong and vivid vocabulary. I'm inspired! :D
Thank you! Glad you are <3
These are so beautifully written. Besides the expression of the feelings behind them, i really liked how you picked just the right words, they really touched my heart. I also really like AABBCC rhymes so that was cherry on top!
Thank youuu <3 im glad you liked it!
Love your writing style and how you express your emotions. You should consider publishing these if you havent already. I could help if interested.
Thank youuu <3
Publishing here mostly on substack, haven’t really found anywhere else yet
Check out www.tdubpublishing.com and send me an email. I can help. I've published several authors amd poets. It's not my day job, just something I do to help talented poets and authors. Your work deserves a larger audience.
Thank you! I’ll look into it when im more free this weekend!
Beautiful !
Thank youu <3
Beautiful and deeply resonant, yet you make the rhythm and rhyme seem effortless.
Thank you <3
These are all so powerful. They speak to the invisible toll it takes ,daily ,to actually just survive in the world on depleted energy due to life’s stress and strain. The need to mentally dress yourself before you get out of the bed JUST to have enough to face today’s onslaught in silence. I hope that you are in a better place now and learned what you needed to learn. Also, I hope that you were as kind to yourself as you could have been during that period. ❤️